 Majyk
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Date: August 3, 2005 @ 6:00 PM
Robert M - This was a very impressive track! I haven't ever heard this kinda stuff from you since I've known you! I wasn't feelin the accapella too much, it had good lines, but it wasn't strong enough. As for the rest of it, the beats were killer, very dramatic, perfect for a finals battle. The punches were good, not too many, placed just right. The material flip was ok. The killer ass flow at the end was excellent! I never knew you could rap like that, I think that surprised a lot of people as well as me. Great way to show your diversity and raise the bar for yourself. Overall, very good, I can tell you want the prize!
Salvation - This track was lacking to me...It's like you kept the same rhyme scheme over 5 different beats, nothing really special. Seeing as how it was a finals battle, I figured you would have brought more to the table. As for the punchlines, you had mad punches! But way too many of them, not that that's a bad thing, but it's not always about the punches. The beats were average, wasn't feelin the fact that you used industry beats for this kinda track. Flow was beautiful, delivery was near perfect. Overall, it just didn't feel like you wanted it more to me, I've heard better from you which is why I gotta go with Robert M.
Both emcees did great though, I was very impressed witht this whole contest!  Diz!
Vote: Robert M
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LilV99x
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Date: August 3, 2005 @ 6:45 PM
Robert M - Track was crazy, i liked the beat alot both choices were nice and fit you ur flow for both of them were on point you soulda came stronher that would of helped "im blowing up like p-nyce stepping on a land mine" sum hallarious shit u had i liekd that line alot good army jokes for p-nyce good that you used sum personal information anf for Salvation i also liked the disses where u said he got by jus because of a cheap vote i jus didnt like that u switched to a diss on p-nyce just when u had started off wit the Salvation jokes the Salvation voice bit was hot also "rockit productions already have a screen name for me" lol i like that one also the accapella should be louder and harder then the ending was insane spit it perfectly fast better than twista i mite say flow was good so over all i like your track
Salvation - you started off strong no trash talking i like that i also see that you took advantage of the fact that nyce is is the army so you went out with the army jokes "because you couldn't punch lines, if you were boxin' a zebra" that line killed me one of my favorites i also like the line were u said rob almost lost to a dude in a rock band ok beat was a nice selection for the event at hand ur flow was just on point making fun of robs girl many personals u came very hard in this one the counterstrike line also got me cracking up u had sum nice punchlines i like the beat change just wasnt feelin the singing before you started rapping more army jokes u took it more than rob another beat change was good all of the beats fit the event the hotel beat didnt fit it but was really funny you got him on that one i like that you were kdding around and serious in the song again hotel song was insane funny and the n sync but the production was a little off i enjoyed that u had a punchline with 2 jokes "tube socks" you had alot of beat changes so it dosent get boring trick quater line was nice ending to the n-sync song was good to fit all the jokes u had on rob overall i really liked yours you stayed with it the whole time
Wow very hard to judge both guys gave it tehre all congrads to both of you it was hard to decide but at the end i think that Salvation had more beat switches and kept it intresting in my opinion i liked his better he went straight to dissin as soon as the trak started and rob talked more not straight dissing again congradulations emcees great tourney thanks diz
Vote - Salvation
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 xxharlemboixx
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Date: August 3, 2005 @ 9:04 PM
Robert M - U had some goodpunches but most the punches u put out were kinda lame. flow was on track. the way u changed ur style of rappping at different point was sick. ur very good sounds like u steped up ur game. When u went fast that was sick.
Salvation - Salvation punchlines were sickest. his delivery was amazing. flow was on track. when he was kinda singing rapping that was sick. his punches im digging it. and his styles are sick maintians flow without stoping even though the beat changed
my vote goes to salvation
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 DeadraveN
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Date: August 3, 2005 @ 9:24 PM
Rob- Killer lines and impressive lyrics. This battle track could easily shine as one of your best performances here on dm. The accapella part was a bit lacking, imo, and the track mighta been a little better without it, but the ending was fan-fucking-tastic. serious skills there.
Sal-Not a bad track, but I was expecting more from the "finals". A good line or two, but overall I found it lacking. A lot of repeated lines/lyrics in place of rhymes, and that shows either laziness or just a lack of creativity. Like I said, it was a good track, but not near up to par with what Rob laid out.
Vote-Robert M
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 AgentMGD
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Date: August 3, 2005 @ 10:48 PM
Robert_M - you have outdone yourself again. loved the flow and beats used, you held no punches back in this time - truly showed what you're all about. DAMN, i had to catch my breath just to keep up with you at the end - HOLY COW, can you rap fast!
Salvation - that was weak! this is the final round - you have to outshine the 1st three rounds and imho, it wasn't there in this round. the beginning beats used was whack - your punches were not there, your lyrics and flow was okay ...not up to par. i heard no unique style ...nothing.
vote: Robert_M
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 TDUBB
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Date: August 4, 2005 @ 12:04 AM
Robert M- your punchlines was very strong. you had a very good beat selection and when you speeded up the beat the shit was made hot. you made it very personal in your flow.
Salvation- once again you had some hot shit. your punchlines wasn't as strong as i thought i should have been. this reminds of a song more than a battle song.
but i enjoyed listening all the battles and i will see you all in the winter battles hopefully as a contestant
when it narrows done my vote goes to
Vote: Robert M
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FrozenFlame44
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Date: August 4, 2005 @ 3:14 AM
Salvation - Crazy punches, but i want liking the Eminem beats...I liked it though.
Robert M - Good punches, and the whole vibe of this song was amazing. I was relly feeling this.
VoTe: RoBeRt M
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Maffmatix
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Date: August 4, 2005 @ 3:53 AM
This was almost a toss up for me cuz they were so close. That said:
RobertM - I liked your track a lot... the production was top notch, and I could hear every last word you spit. I wasn't a huge fan of the fast speed rappin in the end, just cuz it seemed to be to show your speed and not to diss. I liked your punches.. it was easy to listen throughout the whole track. It was a solid track all around and I enjoyed it.
Salvation - There's two problems with your last two battle tracks I've had. One, it's been just slightly hard to understand your voice. I can't tell why, maybe it's the mic quality is weird w/ the trebble or something. And two, you'll have these amazing punchlines... but randomly you'll have one that is mad simple. But that said, I still think your punches are so unique and in this case a bit more interesting than Rob's. I liked your beat change-ups... made me think of Game's 300 bars. I was more entertained by your track, by a millimeter.
1 vote Sal. Very close. I'll be happy with whoever wins.
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Intergalacti...
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Date: August 4, 2005 @ 8:49 AM
Ok I listened to them the other day lets take another gander, where's P-nyce's?
Ok I like the beat already, good punches early funny and rather insulting. Poison in his water pack thats cool, gat in his face lol,It was a good shot to the young voice thing on Sal, Lol not ludikris but get back, I love it when you straem other tracks onto yours you did that with our battle it was awesome. I loved the Robert McDade bit it was really unlike you and really hit me hard. And the call to Diz was really cool decent plug, call me Al Qade hehe, MC in your name thats good, Ok the A capella wasn't my favourite bit of the rap not hugely original, a few people have done that in these battles, lol really good punches though, personally I would have liked you to keep the quick flow up in the a capella but this is good shows your variation, now the awesome beat, hell you blow me away with this shit. Let me catch myt breath hehe, Serious you're right no ones seen this shit off you it is off the charts I dunno how you keep that shit up man I loved it. And a nice plug to Diz as wll cool cool.
Ok Sals
Good punches awesome lyrics so far the only way you'll beat me to death with suicide, you really got decent rhymes and punches not only to the other kids in the battles but everyone else in the world lol. Not much said about rob yet only nyce, it sounds like an original beat its decent nice flow decent speed and i love that punch about counter strike, then into a different beat, lol you can't sing but its absolutely hilarious through your lyrics it works really well. Right next to the capital of country music hahahaI love it.Still there are more punches about nyce than rob, this other beat is good with the soldier beack beat, and now into the next one, I really like how you've mixed every style you can think of its awesome, hehe Mcgrady's eyes, You probably got one of my favourite rap voices it sounds like hmm a white xzibit, quite rough and shit but really clear and easily understandable, nice production, more of the different beats, theres more punches at rob in this part which is better it was kinda lets gang up on nyce before that, serious i love the way you've mixed all these tracks together the fluidity is amazing, hehe you are his father i like that, I like this and the ending wasn't as good as the start but the very end with the 'oh rob bye bye bye' was great hehe.
Woah ok time to make a decision
Both were extremely original and full of new ideas, i think the least original part about robs was the a capella but it was good so ill let you off that one, the beat on robs i loved the medium tempo beat then the a capella then the super fast outrageous speed beats really good variety and sal you ripped off evgery mother fucker on this earth man well enjoyable from n-sync to fuckin 50 cent loved it
The punches are of course a main part of it and both of you had some decent ones, there was one point in sals where i wondered if hes gonna take a stab at rob at all and towards the end he did but a bit empty apart from that,
Robs start with the punches it was kinda slow cos he was talkin about the battles and how your gonna win at first but then it got more interestin.
Decision
I know I've been harping on about him and y'all are probably thinkin I'm voting for him cos I get on with him way more than most rappers but serious Rob M showed me so many more sides in this battle than I ever knew he had.
Sal yoiu really gave it a good go you have absolutely nothin to be ashamed of I think and I think jam master jay(RIP) would be havin problems tryin to mix as many tracks as you did bro but Rob really pulled his thumb out here and showed who he really was.
Vote-RobM
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 onewhodreams
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Date: August 4, 2005 @ 10:44 AM
Salvation -  This is the best I've heard from you so far. As I've said before, I think your voice is smooth and hot and throughout this whole track you keep it goin'. Great lines @ Rob.... the justin timberlake and cubic zirconia were some of my fav's as well as "i'll punch him in the neck and turn his adams apple to motts." I'm not so sure about the singing part  , but I'm diggin' the "you aint a soldier" part and the beat there and this is quite a line, "he gets guy to spread their legs, like the jordan sign." 
Definitely laughed out loud at the whole "rob likes the real little young girls...." verse...
Great track, great flow, you don't miss a beat.
RobertM - Good flow as always... Always dig your voice too, you & Sal both got that "smooth talker" kinda tone goin' on   @ "the only 9's u packin is bags fulla 3rd graders." Diggin' the "r 2 the o 2 the b 2 the e 2" bit.... Not sure about the acapella part, not liking that too much, but after that.... Yeah.... why you been holdin' back on us? eh?  That "apocalypse" ending is hot Robert!  !! Wasn't expecting that at all from you....
 Not an easy choice at all.... I think you both did great and I think you both are winners.
I'm gonna have to give my vote to RobertM.... That ending is what gave you my vote though.... you really gave this more than your all, not that Sal didn't, but in my opinion you just stepped it up more.
Excellent job you two and hope to see you both back in the Winter Battles.  
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TransAutobot
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Date: August 4, 2005 @ 12:04 PM
Robert -
"Them makin it this bad,shows how bad this tourney is"
Thats sweep line and the toaster shit was pretty nice too.
that shit was funny. Other then that I didnt hear any other good punches. A bunch of nice spittin and flowin but I didnt hear much hard punches that would make me go "this kid ripped it."
lol Wait, the second beat dropped in. That shit is pretty hot. Good attitude about the tourney towards the end. Shit wasnt bad but it'd be nice if u hit with more punches. Take shots at the names, make shit up lol.
Salvation -
"He take more shots in the mouth, more then 50 cent" - lmao!!
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"Lost this dude in a rock band" lol !!
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"And man damn, this shit is great, im battlin a man that looks like Justin Timberlake" LMAO!!
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"And when lose i'll split money with you chill dawg, as long as I can use ur f**kin head up as a billboard" LMAO!!!
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"I'll put a heater to ya neck and pop ya collar for you" DAMN!!! LMAO!!
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"We aint eye to eye like a unibrow" - LMAO
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"He goes both ways like Mac Grady's eye's" - LOL DAMN
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"Is that your face or did u moon the camera" LMAO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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This kid got so much punches he should drop the mic and become a professional boxer. LMAO this shit was hot. I was laughin so hard, I was cryin. He played that nsync "bye bye" song I flipped LOL!! That soldier shit was a nice flip on EM's shit. He got alittle bit of everything on this. Punches was off the roof. He hit harder than the smell of a skunks ass.
Vote - Salvation.
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K3VIN
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Date: August 4, 2005 @ 11:31 PM
RobertM
This is ur hottest battle track yet and the others were good still, i must say u stepped it up a notch, great flow, not to many punches but some were funny and hard hitting, the fast part was awesome, over all a great track its one i can play mor then once and still like which is good
Salvation, i liked the lines cept stuff about getting more shots tehn 50 cent ive heard more then 50 times honestly, the punches were plentyful and hard, but the skurring got on my nerves and the constant beat changes made it difficult to enjoy to the fullest extent, the encore rip off thing, i didnt feel at all, it isnt that brilliant to cahnge the words like that, the rest was pretty good ur flow was good but i wasnt feeling the voice all the time.
Robert i think u did well round 2 and above and keep improving sal uur ealrier tracks were pretty good but this last one was changing up to much etc
Good Effort
My Vote- RobertM
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JRTwine
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Date: August 5, 2005 @ 1:42 AM
Yo both tracks was hot the final show down good punchlines great beats hmm sal i always liked ya flow beat was nice lyrics where on point plus the beat changes was ok but not to good
rob i loved ya voice ya shit nver dissapoint my my nigg loved the punches the beat was hot wit it so ima half to go with VOTE=ROBERTM
I GOT SHIT TO DO IM OUT E.S.C ALL DAY HOLLA
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freddemillio
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Date: August 5, 2005 @ 5:19 PM
RobertM - The intro is very cool  . This drives really well. Lots of good punctuations with the vocals. That break at 1:37 is too good . The orchestral samlpe in the background gets a bit old and I am happy that you have several change-ups throughout the piece. Good flow and rhythm. The a cappela part is a nice touch. The ending is beautiful. You put all the production values that you could into it. The mix is killer and the speed is fan-fuking-tastic. Loved it.
Salvation - Good work, no doubt about it. But still it lacks drive for me. A bit too slow and plodding. There is some variation and the production shows care and work. But the spice is not as hot as RobertM.
Overall - RobertM's feels more hot. I tap my foot more when listening to RobertM's track. Good punches in both and both are high quality, but RobertM's gets my attention a bit more.
My vote is for RobertM
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 ChillinBuzz
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Date: August 6, 2005 @ 6:13 AM
RobertM - "you should call me Al Qaeda the way im bombing you bitches" this is tight. straight up from the start you sound like your warming up for the boxing match of the decade - wicked flow coupled with a fat beat - the dropout left me thinking that the song was going to finish with a vocal tirade and i thought it was withering... then bam!  that ending was  badass!
Salvation - "ya big ass forehead as a billboard"  wicked beat supporting a truly sweet flow. i could understand what you were saying a lot better overall at times than Rob, i love the beat changes too "timberlake with the cock nose" then another beat and style change - kudos my only gripe is the continuity doesnt always work with the many beat changes at first but i remember more of what you rapped with one listen and a couple of the sections was tighter than a ducks ass  phat!
vote... shit... gotta listen again... brb...
definitely a tough one for me but going on the points i made, style, beats, punches i could actually make out first time and flow... Rob's got it by a single point.
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 LyricalyIncl...
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Date: August 7, 2005 @ 9:17 PM
RobertM-Good Lyric's, i could see you were gettin in to it by the way your voice sound, the ending was fire and you flowed really good
Salvation-It was ight,but i heard betta from you u didnt get into it as much but the lyrics were good and flow was iight... both were very good tracks
Vote-Robertm cause of the ending and good lyrics-no hard feeling sal. your's was right up there... sORRY DIZ NOW I HAVE 200 POST
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Dizeazed
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Date: August 7, 2005 @ 9:52 PM
Robert M - Beat’s pretty dope. I liked the acapella… I dunno why everyone’s hatin’ on it.  The ending was aight: Flow was good, but I wish you woulda had some punchlines in that last segment. Your production was cool, but Sal took you in that aspect. You came with that mellow, fury-type flow. You hella stepped up your game. Props!
My favorite lines:
“I’m blowin’ up like P-Nyce steppin’ on a land mine”
”Do’em up so bad the lord couldn’t’ find Salvation”
“While he sacking potatoes, packing tomatoes and battling gators I’m blastin these haters and slicing with razorz”
“The only 9 that you’s packin is bags full of third graders”
“Tell’em why you suck so bad *then you flip his track on’em*”
“I’ll put fruit upon ur casket leave u dead and berried”
“The last time he dropped somethin hot...it was bread from the toaster”
“His punchlines are so stupid...u gotta dumb ta understand it”
Salvation. – Beats = dope! I love how you came out blasting (no intro.) When you flipped it on the Dre/Em beat and started singing… I was laughing, cause I know what you were doing, but you really can’t sing playboy  Lol @ “you AIN’T a soldier”. @ “You can’t be no older then 14” It took me a couple listens to catch this, but you flipped it on Nyce and said “Nyce I am Darth, and I am your father!” Production was proper and energy was on point. Oh man… You had me laughin’ the whole track.
My favorite lines:
“The only way you’ll beat me to death, if fukin’ suicide”
“And if knowledge is deadly then he’s a minimal threat”
“You couldn’t punch lines if you was boxin’ a zebra”
“As long as I can use your big ass forehead as a billboard”
“I’ll put the heater to your neck and pop your collar for you”
“We ain’t eye to eye like a unibrow!”
“The only RPG’s he know’s is in them video games”
“I punch him in the neck and turn his adam’s apple to Motts”
“Killin’ people with his army…. On Counter Strike”
“You right next to the Capital of Country music!”
“He gets guys to spread their legs like the Jordan sign”
“But his boyfriend shot him once in the back of the throat”
“Playing cards is the only time you see that game of war”
“I got this shit like 6:30… hands down!”
“Even though you look like it… You are NOT N’Sync”
“Rob’s a faggot and that’s why I got my back to the wall”
“Is that he’s proof you can be conceived by being fuked in the ass”
… and the “Bye Bye Bye” you used for Rob @ the end!!!
Vote – This has been, by far, the dopest battle we’ve had all tournament. I had huge expectations for both of yall… and you FLEW past them! I’m so glad yall brought so much to the plate for the Finals. I tip my hat to both opponents (and Nyce, cause I know how bad he wanted this shit.) Overall, you both had good production, beats, energy and punches. However, Salvation’s punches were harder in my opinion. They made me say “ooohhh shit!” more then Rob’s. Not sayin’ that Rob didn’t come hard as steel… but Salvations had more effect on me and were more entertaining with the beat switches. Madd props to both of yall. Thank you for all of your effort.
My vote goes to Salvation.
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TopDollar
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Date: August 7, 2005 @ 10:40 PM
Rob - you got the landmine shit from my post and the can't find salvation from nyce, the hell man, but damn anyway you came hard. outro killed it with the flow i wasn't expecting that after the acapella. and when i heard it i thought it was hate me now by nas and it dropped different so that was a shock factor right there. good presentation, you tried your best on this and it showed. the only thing bad i can say is that the track lacked the similies and metas that display the depth of an artists' creativity. nothing really made me really jump out of my seat until the end and it was more about flow than anything else. all i have to do is look above at what diz posted and you can already see how many more lines sal had.
Sal - punches throughout the whole thing, some i heard before like the jordan sign one, but the track in all was funny as hell and a lot of wittyness. "no older than 14" had me rolling on the floor. ahhh i got a shoutout, but anyway i can see a lot of people missing a bunch of these lines you threw, diz picked up on them though...you had simple and complex punches for the ones who really listen and for the dumber listeners too.
on first listen i would have picked robbed but i listen to each battle 3 times. as i listened to rob's more it began to seem less finesse, and the more i listened to sal's i began catching more lines that i didnt catch before, too bad nyce couldnt post.
vote = salvation
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Laszlotherapper
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Date: August 8, 2005 @ 1:11 AM
I find it interesting how dizeazed can laugh at sals punchlines with sals dick in his mouth. thats a hard one to understand. and your obviously guna vote sal's way, because ur in love wit the guy yall be textin eachother on aim and shit...
anyways. just for fun im going to have to say:
Rob m, I FIND IT INTERESTING that you vote for salvation in our battle, YET in your disstrack u meantion that I beat/tied him, and the only reason he won on the tie is because of a cheated vote. wow the truth comes out. i realy felt that line, tobad u couldnt mention that when when i wanted to see a fair vote in ROUND 3. that might have helped. hey look, i would have been in finals from that! moron. salvation, like seriously ur shit was wack, but this is guna be funny right here. hey rob m i dont like ur attitude towards dmusic, and i dont think anyone with you views should win any prize. also, I LIKED SALVATIONS BEAT BETTER LOL. im guna have to give this one to salvation, because i know now that he lost to rob m, so it doesnt matter, and i want atleast one person to feel wat its like to be me (robM) to feel wat its like to get a gay vote. so because salvations beats were better and i dont like ur personality robm, im gona have to vote salvation oh by the way. i think sals diss track was pathetic, and also had no fow, a fucking anoying singing verse, zero personal punches LITERALY, and rob m's track was better. and rob m is younger. so sal dont get it wrong like u beat this teenager as well. but u lost already so it dont matter wat i vote
alright. diz guna delete my vote anyways once hes dun straddling youngvoice/salvations dick.
also i wasnt gona comment, but i change my mind. Robm looses due to not as good of a beat, and a bad personality. and my vote should technically stand, BECAUSE young voices did.
Vote - Salvation AHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
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K3VIN
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Date: August 8, 2005 @ 1:32 AM
i dont think laslows vote is to count kinda a sad fate for all that time he wrote that i kno ur gonna delete this but its funny
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Laszlotherapper
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Date: August 8, 2005 @ 1:48 AM
k3v... i kinda figured that (^^^diz guna delete my vote anyways once hes dun straddling youngvoice/salvations dick.)
also, incase dizeazed, u arent gona go onto my page anymore due to ur loss in respect to me bacause of my attitude (which was actually triggered by the gayness u let happen during voting in my battle) here is the coment i posted in regards to your sore loser comment on my page.
c the thing is. i didnt actually loose. i didnt even tie. u let sals best friend's emotional vote count. and then that "tied" us. so i dont know wat tied shit ur on, but i beat him. hey diz, you were also cool, until you let that vote count. i hope it was worth it. cuz u lost my respect as soon as i work up the morning after round 3 voting was over. i hope salvations 1 inch indian cock was worth my friendship wit u man... i dont know wat your moma told u, but what are u supposed to say to the other person when u make a mistake??? think about that... btw did i loose ur respect before or after that commment. because uve had me blocked on aim forever now. keep chattin wit sal tho, its coo...
Pz. yall.
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jd2theog
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Date: August 8, 2005 @ 3:59 AM
Robert M-Good beats,flow was on point,Good production.
I didnt here alot of punches..
you had more for for p-nyce,than Sal.
Hot lines... so bad the lord could'nt find Salvation...The last time he dropped somethin hot...it was bread from the toaster...till not even his shadow remains..why you f your dad,such so bad.
why the gun talk??...
Salvation-yo..Beats good,I like how you switch the tracks up.flow is on point,production ok.
Hot lines...man you had a lot of them!
The only way you’ll beat me to death, is fn suicide......And if knowledge is deadly then he’s a minimal threat..As long as I can use your big ass forehead as a billboard...Rob’s a faggot and that’s why I got my back to the wall.....no older then 14!..Rob’s a faggot and that’s why I got my back to the wall..Bye bye bye!!
Sal was on fire Imo,way more punches!!
VOTE=SALVATION.
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Judge2005
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Date: August 8, 2005 @ 4:14 AM
* * * VOTING HAS ENDED * * *
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TDUBB
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Date: August 11, 2005 @ 4:05 AM
congradulation robert m. ill see you in the winter battles./ hopefully i be in it this time
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K3VIN
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Date: October 8, 2005 @ 3:19 PM
my bad.. i rethink this.. salvatino had this like 6:30 hands down..
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K3VIN
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Date: October 8, 2005 @ 3:23 PM
speaking of fillers rob m..
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K3VIN
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Date: December 2, 2005 @ 4:05 PM
the beginning beats used was whack
agentmdg hatin on biggie damn..
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BIR
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Date: January 31, 2006 @ 2:58 AM
^haha glad i came back to see this
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