 Maffmatix
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Date: July 25, 2005 @ 3:32 AM
RobertM - HAHA, the beginning cracked me the fuck up!! I like the beat... vocals could be turned up a little bit. Flow is on point. Punchlines are good, not always hard hitters, but some hit pretty well. Not too complex. Second beat part is easier to understand and flow is good again, but the punches weren't the strongest. All in all, a pretty good battle track.
Top Dollar - Beat is hot. So far it's not very personal, sounds more like a normal track. Now I'm startin' to hear some stabs. I like the lyrics in this one a bit more. It's a bit darker and more cocky (in a good way). But definately less personal attacks. LMAO at the end... hahaha. "Get outta my studio dick-face!!" Funny shit.
Well it's definately hard to judge... they practically equal in my eyes for different reasons. I think I'll go for RobertM just cuz I liked the sheer larger amount of personal stabs he had. But that was so close to a coin toss for me.
1 vote- RobertM
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 jd2theog
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Date: July 25, 2005 @ 7:48 AM
Top Dollar - bangin beat sounds good,I liked the flow,mix was good.
Flavor that stuck in da ear hole,snaped like Im takin a pic,THE Human Subwoofer,treble knob on my cellphone,blow tits like the world trade.
the end had me I  u,SMACK.
Robert M - Beats not bad,flow is cool,mix is ok..a little bragin?
Flavor that stuck in da ear hole,..on my knees suck'e suck'e,Vanilla Rice,ching chang
 I liked the beat change and the flow,nice.wish you would of used more of that
... ..OK.
I think Top had more punches,It was tight..
VOTE=Top Dollar
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jd2theog
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Date: July 25, 2005 @ 8:15 AM
^ 1-more thing this was like the monotone match-up.
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 freddemillio
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Date: July 25, 2005 @ 8:47 AM
Top Dollar - The beat is mixed too far back for me. It lacks punch and the rap does not come together with the beat create an ensemble feeling. Good flow on the rap: pretty smooth. Lines that made me  - "Mike Tyson actin cute...", "You get shit on from above when you fµck with birds..." I like the slowed-down tape effect at the end. The spoken part at the end is a bit slow and not particularly clever. TD's rap is much more interesting than the spoken part.
RobertM - The beat is more interesting and comes together better with the rap. Could still use some work but is better than the production in Top Dollar's piece. The overall feel of this rap is more punchy and lively. Much more snap and drive. Lines that made me - "Suckee, Suckee...", "Green tea and fried rice...", "Dropped the fork..." I like the beat change too. The whole piece seems to have more thought and craft to it.
Conclusion - The insults are pretty much equal for me. Both of the artists get some good punches in. Both of them have some humorous moments. What makes the difference for me is that RobertM's work seems to have more thought and craftsmanship to it.
My vote = RobertM.
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onehizy
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Date: July 25, 2005 @ 8:47 AM
top dollar- had a hot has beat fosho that the flow was off the chain man there was time when i laugh my ass off and i now the production was that good but we yall know what you workin wit but your flow makes up for that.
RobertM- is crazy up come wit some off the wall shit feelin all the punch lines the flow was off the chain as well for your mix down was good it was a close one i need time to think i will post tonight my vote!!
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 ChillinBuzz
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Date: July 25, 2005 @ 11:09 AM
both got bangin beats... both got great flow... Top Dollar's attacks were stunning ! then i stick on Robert's, gotta hear the response to Top's gay jibe... and he tore it up like paper. best battle of all the rounds for sure. Top's attack was pure class but Robert's was a step above.
RobertM.
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TopDollar
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Date: July 25, 2005 @ 11:49 AM
http://topdollar.dmusic.com/
Dizeazed, don't delete this post. It's just a link to my lyrics since everyone seems to be missing my punches. I threw one like every line, but I'm guessing yall just can't catch them as fast as I throw them.
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SalvationMC
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Date: July 25, 2005 @ 12:18 PM
Top Dollar - You brag alooooooooooot in this. Try to hold back a bit on that, this is a battle man. You wanna aim at them, not focus on yourself. Some nice lines. You played his voice a bit. Mike Tyson actin' cute was pretty nice. Not crazy lyrically, but, just funny. Nice on that. Outro was hilarious. Punch like me, is dope, aswell. Shoot out, nice. Overall, pretty solid. Pick this up, though. I know you can do better. But, nice, overall.
RobertM - Lmao @ The Intro. The beginning bars weren't needed. Mentioning 2 or 4 bars of no info is cool, but you dragged it a bit. Lyrics are a bit ehh. ROFL @ SUCKY SUCKY. That's hilarious. Vanilla rice. You're picking it up a bit more, now. Ching Chang. Nice adlibs. Emotion, man. You're a bit monotone in this. Try to switch up the tone in your adlibs, that helps, or, use a different delivery once in awhile in your main vocals. Second time around, feeling the beat. Closer wasn't that great, but it wasn't horrible status. Overall, pretty good.
This was actually a pretty close battle. I thought this was going to come out with Top Dollar on top but I can see this being neck and neck. I think the lyricism and the actual battle in this shit was neck and neck. But, I think that Top Dollar edged him out with the delivery overall.
So, eventhough both opponents did good, I gotta vote for Top Dollar. But, great fight Rob.
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 BIGFNJUKNOW
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Date: July 25, 2005 @ 2:50 PM
Both trax were good but lyriclly Id hve 2 give 2 Top Dollar.2 bad rob m couldnt hve had someone else rap his shit itd been better.Didnt know there was a wrong sounded voice for rap til i heard that.Damn I wish I could vote.
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Intergalacti...
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Date: July 25, 2005 @ 2:53 PM
Ok theres a lot of good things I'm hearing here from TD. I don't like the beat. Gonna be honest I think its just a bit lame thats just my opinion though. Theres a lot of good lines and its good that your showin the things he might take the piss outta you for like the whole part chinese thing. And the end bit is hilarious. I think it could have a bit more energy to the rapping but apart from that its good.
OK I love the way you battle you get as much dirt as you can on the victim in anyway possible. Theres a lot of racist jokes which isnt what I always like but you've done them well. What do you call a chinese rapper? Vanilla Rice. Thats good. Its got a lot of energy and a bouncin beat.
heres the second bit I was waitin for sounds a bit like the riff from mine and your battle Rob hehe. Just joking its cool. The flow overall is good Rob.
Although I was quite suprised with the battle Top Dollar put up and I do have a new found respect for him. I think I'm gonna have to go with Rob on this one. Theres not much I don't like about this guys battling its original, decent beats with some decent punches and although Dollar your most of the way there sorry dude I do think Robs got you
RobM
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 TDUBB
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Date: July 25, 2005 @ 4:22 PM
top dollar- yo your skit was funny as hell. i like your quality. your track was well put together.
robert m- once again flawless shit. hot as punchlines. that shit had me in here lmao. that was a great beat selection .
vote- robert m
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moam
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Date: July 25, 2005 @ 5:31 PM
top dollar-You had great punches. The beat was alright, didn't grab my attention too much. The overall diss wasn't spectacualr through my mind, but it worked 
RobertM: The beat kicked ass. Some of the lyrics were alright and the delivery was alright. The one thing that turned me off from the whole thing were all the Asian jokes... What the fuck is wrong with being asian? or black? or white? I have never understood racist bullshit. The track itself sounded great. But when I rip apart the lyrics, I spotted about 5 different Asian jokes that don't mean shit.
Vote: Top Dollar
(No offense Robert M, I think you can whip up some wicked ass shit, you just got - points for the racist shit which put TD ahead.)
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AgentMGD
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Date: July 25, 2005 @ 8:10 PM
Robert: "bet you spend all of your money on green tea and fried rice" "you need to stop rappin and need to stick to origami" 
loved the intro and the rhythms used for this round ...still it seems you're holding back on your punches however your message does get across with your lyrical flow - the change-up on the 2nd half - a nice beat for  .
Top Dollar - finally you have improved on your intros to come out swinging. however you could improve on the music and beats - it's a good effort but mho - it's not enough to get the 4th round. The lyrics are okay refrences to Michael Jackson, R.Kelly and the World Trade were ok but not great ...the ending was funny.
Voting time - hard decision here... both you were good - casting my vote for Robert_M
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 onewhodreams
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Date: July 25, 2005 @ 10:45 PM
Top Dollar - I always like your voice, but I'm just not feelin' ya' much here on this track. I don't know, it's just all kinda....the same. The flow needs some action or something. Funny ending tho! Best part of the whole track!
Robert M - Excellent intro! Your flow is always pretty much right on, great disses... You got the personal ones goin' on Definitely like the beat change. You got all that confidence in your voice... diggin' it.
My vote - RobertM 
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JRTwine
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Date: July 26, 2005 @ 3:24 AM
yo yaw both my boys so ima vote fair unlike other people
TOP dollor-loving this shit homie loved ya flow kindaliked the beat the lyrics was straight crack thats the impotant thing fellin it funny outro
RobertM-always loved ya flow homie ya voice im lovin it the beat nice that shit hot lyrics they hot but not as hot as top's punchlines where great
well i reach my conclusion
my vote iS=top dollor
beacuse i felt his lyrics more but rob his shit was hot to bobbin my head althe way threw but im a vote
Vote=TOP DOLLOR
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Svensta
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Date: July 26, 2005 @ 3:24 PM
RobertM - laughed out loud at some of your lyrics, man. I cannot believe you used 'shinto' in a rap battle.
TD - Some of the lyrics just didnt gel well enough, they stretched too far and worked too hard. Good stuff, but not your all-time best.
Vote - RobertM
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DjInsertCool...
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Date: July 26, 2005 @ 4:41 PM
Top Dollar- like your style, your voice was made for raping, beat was cool at first, lyrics very powerful, good rips, I like the breakdowns and stops in the beat. Some of your lyrics fall flat, you rely to much on your voice to carry the message. The hits on robert are pretty hard core The one real prob is the beat doesn't have any switch up, it's just the same thing repeadetly, I guess that doesn't have anything to do with your lyrics so I can't hold it against you in my vote... the ending is funny love the impression!
Robert M- ha ha! Nice beat, lyrics getting heavier this is a real diss track now. Like the change up, good job on getting it right the firstime. Your voice is unique and that's why I love your rap's, your not the cookie cutter rapper, cause they are everywhere on this site! you have a truly original style. That is what get's my vote.
Vote= Robert M
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greatscottpr...
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Date: July 26, 2005 @ 11:28 PM
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Majyk
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Date: July 26, 2005 @ 11:55 PM
Robert M: Good ass punches, good flow, great beat. Loved the line about him being a fake ass shintou, thats just cold. Intro was funny as hell, had me rollin for a while. The personals were great, lots of asian jokes in there. overall, it was good for the time u had to post it, a one day diss, came out alright.
Top Dollar: wasnt feelin the beats too much, but the flow was beautiful. Punches were good, but it was hard to understand u at times. Im glad u left the link up, but shouldnt u have made the lyrics clearer in the first place? the personals werent that good to me either. and the outro was a bite off of Rob's intro. plus, the whole thing about the pic was kinda pointless becuz i saw it on ur page like 2 days ago, then it vanished..lol. anywho, overall, this was a good track, but u just didnt bring enough to the table to grab my vote.
Vote: Robert M
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sgtmay
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Date: July 27, 2005 @ 12:34 AM
Top Dollar: beats were not really the best.......comedy skit didnt work for me......that wouldnt have flew on stage.......your flow was right on most of the time but i caught a couple places where your words didnt fit perfect but you covered it well....an overall average performance.
Robert M: Beats were good.....flow was tight.......lmao @ fried rice line......lmao Sucky sucky line......wasnt feelin the beat changeup but your flow was tight....Good performance overall
Vote = Robert M
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Judge2005
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Date: July 27, 2005 @ 1:50 PM
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