 SalvationMC
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Date: July 10, 2005 @ 9:24 PM
Young Voice - Good beat selection. Your flow was alot better then other dude's. You need to add emotion. You change your tone often, but sound angry. You sound like you're almost reading. Get angry, scream, go rawr hiss grr. You flow did slip up a few times, however. Nothing stand out as for as punchlines. Quality could be alot better, but it's better then dude's. Atleast I could hear your shit. Regardless, you weren't bragging about yourself the entire verse, which is good. Most people nowadays just brag constantly and don't even diss their opponent. Overall, an okay voice. The part that made me go "what the hell...?" the most, was the "what happened to your ear" line .. I didn't get it, at all. I haven't seened his pic before. You gotta remember, when you do lines like this. SAY what it is. You want to make people laugh. Cuz you completely lost me there. Overall, decent verse.
Jd2theog - Boooooooo @ Feeding off verses. That's whack. You were bragging. Don't brag unless it puts himself down when you're doing it. Bragging in battles makes you lose. Your quality is a mix between horrible and bad. Luckily, I could still pick apart your lyrics. You need to learn how to mix your vocals a bit better. Regardless, your flow was very choppy. Lyrics were pretty weak, to be honest with you. The stanza right around 2:00 was pretty bad. You don't tell stories in a battle. That's worse then adding a chorus in a battle. Just being honest my man, I'd rather tell you how to get better then to call you whack and say you're horrible.
With that said,
voteyoungvoice
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Maffmatix
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Date: July 10, 2005 @ 10:21 PM
Young Voice - Beat was pretty hot.. regardless of the fact that it was bad quality. Flow sounded a bit off and on... which is always distracting. You had some decent punches and the lyrics were ok over-all. I think it definately could have been more emotional and more creative. You didn't grab my interest tightly enough. It was decent though.
Jd2theog - Well the beat was very strange.. not terrible, but a little distracting. A bit catchy though. Your voice had more emotion to it and I liked your punches more because I could sense a little more creativity. Your voice was almost too hard to understand, because of the quality... but I could make most of it out. I think with your lyrics, you could try to make it less A-B-C style rapping next time.
All in all, it was really hard for me to decide, but I liked JD's punches a bit better... sooo....
I vote for Jd2theOGGGGG
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onehizy
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Date: July 11, 2005 @ 7:30 AM
voice got my vote just cuz that i can here him better
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RobertMcDade
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Date: July 11, 2005 @ 12:47 PM
Whoa...sounds like you were way to close to the mic, and then you upped the volume on the vocals. Very hard to hear, but I listened to it anyways. You had a good flow, some good punches, and the delivery was ok. Overall, this was average, just like Voice's, but I don't think you did enough to beat him. In mu opinion, you have a great "rock" voice, but it's just not fitting for "rap" songs. You even started singing in some parts like it was a rock song. It's all good though, just work on it in the future. 
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TopDollar
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Date: July 11, 2005 @ 4:23 PM
Young Voice - You sound like you wrote this in 2 minutes, and then recorded it in the middle of the night. Did you think he wasn't gonna show up or something?
Okay...Quality is better than the other guy and the beat is a little better. But the flow is off at some points and the "hey everyone, come gather near" was corny.
I'm not bashing you, I just call it how I see it. I wasn't impressed. But keep working on your art.
Jd2theog - You built off Young Voice's verse, which is gonna make me judge harder on your verse. But then again, Young Voice posted it early so it's to his disadvantage.
First off I hate the beat. But your punches are better than Young Voice, the personals are alright. I didn't read your post up there since it wouldn't be fair for Young Voice.
But you have more emotion and sound slightly more polished. Production quality is worse but not everybody has the luxury of top-notch equipment. Lay off on the voice doubles, it's distracting. Make it more subtle next time. Step your game up next round. Otherwise I'm gonna be disappointed that I voted for you. Good luck.
Vote = JD 2 the OG.
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 farfor44
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Date: July 11, 2005 @ 7:38 PM
Young Voice-I agree with Top Dollar,it sounds like this was written very fast
with not much forethought,which resulted in the flow being broken at many points...To me Rap must show a great ammount of creativity.To me Young voice is lacking in this department.I believe Young Voice thought JD2theog was gonna be a no show
so just any Rap would suffice,which was
a fatal mistake in the 1st round...
JD2theog-Sucker Punches sounds well structured..Young Voice posted first,which was an automatic advantage for you if you could play off his words, which you did very well..The flow was 360degrees,The beats were top notch,and your Rap was passionate and determined..also the added special effects shows that you are as creative
as anyone in this Battle...
So My Vote goes to...
Vote=JD2theog
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 onewhodreams
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Date: July 11, 2005 @ 8:57 PM
Pretty good... The quality sucks but the flow is good, nice voice, nice beat and some creativity. Better than Young Voice so my vote goes to jd2theog. 
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Date: July 12, 2005 @ 1:14 PM
 
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mystery-machine
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Date: July 12, 2005 @ 1:30 PM
Youngvoice: Beats was ok but nothin special. Verses flow ok but the performance was kind of lack-luster. punches were weak.
Jd2theog: mix is weak but I like the beats! Verses flow good and ya got creative with it. performance is good. I like your punches. I think you have the better diss track.
Vote= JD2theog
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 AgentMGD
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Date: July 12, 2005 @ 1:41 PM
Youngvoice - you seemed off at certain points during the song. your missing or following behind few beats.
Jd2theog - loved the fresh beat and style ...something i could  to(that's a compliment coming from a non-rap music lover)
final vote - JD2theog
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independentm...
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Date: July 12, 2005 @ 1:46 PM
I know there is a "remix version" but it wouldn't be fair to use that version as the comparison so I am gonna use THIS one!
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 EllyKellner
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Date: July 12, 2005 @ 1:53 PM
Voted for
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sgtmay
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Date: July 12, 2005 @ 5:20 PM
Young voice: Beats are ok but your verse could use more work....you coulda made it flow better just by changing a few words....."you cant even make beats why you think you can rhyme to em....why'd you even sign up you're just wasting my time man".....that flows about as good as peanut butter!.....it woulda sounded better if you woulda changed "why'd you even sign up you're just wasting my time man" to "Why'd you sign up you're just a waste of time man"
Trying to pack more words than you need in a verse will always complicate things.....mixing quality is a little off.
Jd2TheOG: Beats are ok....verse flows good....I heard this track in the studio but this one seems to be missing the bottom end on the beats(that plays right into one of his disses...not good).....Your verse is definately structured better and flows well....but not perfect(missed your mark on turn tricks).
In summary: both artists have mixing issues(negates points on mix).....Verse and flow (Jd2theog =7 youngvoice=4).
Vote = Jd2theog
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Dizeazed
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Date: July 12, 2005 @ 5:55 PM
Jd2theog = No intro? (Just straight to the point, eh?  ) Beat =... interesting. "I got beats older then you on the shelf"  "Zac's mom to the emergency room" Some of your punches were a bit weak, but I like how you incorporated classic, famous lines from major artists. Good shit.
Young Voice = Beat is coo and works with the title of the battle. Jd2theog had a bit better quality then you. Your flow fell off here and there. You woulda sounded madd better if you memorized your lines or practiced it a bit more before you recorded.
Vote = Young Voice. This was the hardest battle to judge, by far. Both came with moderate punches and only decent quality. In the end, Young Voice’s punches hit me harder and were spit over a grimier beat (just happens to be my style). Good battle you two.
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zedsalt
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Date: July 12, 2005 @ 7:07 PM
I listened to the version of "Sucker Punches" on J's page...don't know how much bearing that has on my choice, but I thought I'd mention it in the spirit of honesty.
This wasn't that tough of a decision.
Y'all KNOW that means I'm votin' for Jd2theog, right?!?
Biggest issue: those wierd-ass beats DJMaffmatix mentioned? Anything else just makes me sleepy.
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SweetTemptation
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Date: July 12, 2005 @ 7:18 PM
this took alot of thought,to come to this conclusion. vote= Jd2theog
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justinother1
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Date: July 12, 2005 @ 8:03 PM
ok,i'm an old fart,and this whole rap thing is kinda beyond me...i mean,didn't the whole biggie/tupac thing start out like this??? (and we ALL know how that wound up)
young voice--- you had a much clearer mix,and some interesting music happening (is that allowed in rap?)
jd2theog--- whoever mixed this should be shot (tupac?),but,if i was hearing this shit said about me,i guess you'd be the one i gave the privelege of the drive-by
my vote= jd2theog
now,you two go have a beer and shake hands
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Sinicide
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Date: July 12, 2005 @ 10:17 PM
YOUNG VOICE
First, I dont think you should be dissin peoples ability to mix when you dont even process your vocals. I thought a lot of your lines were a little basic but you did stay on beat. It kinda sounds like you use less and less emotion as the song progresses, but that could just be me. You just seem a little too chill for a battle..
JD2THEOG
Beats kinda weird, more of a club track.. I dunno. You flow was on, relaxed but you kept it steady. Unfortunatly, like Voice's track some lines were hard to hear. Also, like Voice's track, this lacked punches. You guys arent leaving much to judge on! I dont know why Im having such a hard time deciding some of these battles. That Metal Tank reverb you added was kinda weird.. lol.. Scared me at first..
IN CONCLUSION
How come you both talk about buses?? Did someone feed off the other's verse? Hmm.. or just a coincidence. Well, this one was hard to judge, only because I felt they both lacked legitimate, hard-hitting punches. My vote goes to -- JD2THEOG
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LordTrey
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Date: July 12, 2005 @ 10:30 PM
Young Voice...Your flow was flawed..broken up too many times..The beats were OK, but showed some potential..Your punches were too subtle,and lacked true originality. I see alot of potential coming out of ya and alot of good things to come.
JD2theOG...The use of sound effects was what won this for you..The whole bus screeching and the PA in da hospital..true originality..I heard alot of original material in your punches...Your flow is almost flawless..
In conclusion...My vote goes to JD2theOG
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leplume
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Date: July 12, 2005 @ 11:12 PM
Voted for!
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kyodylee
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Date: July 13, 2005 @ 1:49 AM
Hmmm, this was a tough choice.
I really didn't care for the "singsong" style rap in the first part of JD2theOG's entry.
I thought Young Voice did a better job with his beat. It was dark and interesting and matched his lyrics very well. But he lost me with his rap. It was sometimes hard to follow, and seemed forced at times, not relaxed and natural. Still, lots of potential there ... just needs to work on it somemore. Prolly could use some breathing technique exercises.
JD2theOG came roaring back in the second half of his track and won me over. Flow was right on and I thought the sound effects were well done also.
So my vote goes to JD2theOG.
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leplume
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Date: July 13, 2005 @ 1:54 AM
need to descript? okay, love the flow, the beat was killer, effects were way cool! Voted for JD!
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Judge2005
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Date: July 13, 2005 @ 3:37 AM
* * * VOTING CLOSED * * *
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FrozenFlame44
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Date: July 14, 2005 @ 5:55 PM
I like this beat..
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