 onehizy
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Date: July 11, 2005 @ 7:32 AM
my vote is LASZLO but you had a good flow keep dat shit poppin but who know's
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RobertMcDade
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Date: July 11, 2005 @ 12:12 PM
Ok, this was actually better than I expected. I heard some great stuff in there
"if your the hope for the future, i feel bad for our economy"
"u put your name infront of -therapper- and think u raw"
The punchlines were good, but I loved the personals.
Great stuff...not a bad beat choice either.
My advice: Get more personals, research next opponent and use the collected info against him, step it up on the punches (i liked the wet napkin thing, but you gotta come harder if you wanna win) and hone your flow more, it was pretty much all on point, but I heard some breaks in it. Now don't take this the wrong way, but this win wasn't all you, I think Las underestimated you to much and he came a lot weaker than he should have. So step it up in the future rounds if you make it.
"but in the darkness the under dog seems ta shine"
You definately did this time kid. 
Vote: Amp
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SalvationMC
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Date: July 11, 2005 @ 2:15 PM
You need to quit whining Laszlo. Seriously, you're like the kindergartener of the battle. If shit doesn't go your way your panties get in a bunch. If you were half as good as you claim to be you'd have done alot better then your verse and shut him out, so people who even hated you WOULDN'T be able to vote against you, cuz they KNEW you won.
Laszlo - 1:05 intro? Hell no. If it was funny, do it - If it's not, don't do it. You weren't even talking about your opponent half the time. You were bragging. Look in my other votes. Bragging makes you LOSE. This is a BATTLE, not a EGO contest. Your punchlines werent that strong. Your flow was good, however. "You gonna finish last, like the fat kid's vegetables." Pretty weak opener, to be honest with you. "You think you a star, then so is Clay Aiken." Uhh, Laszlo, Clay Aiken is played on MTV, right? He is a star. This could've been worded alot better. The sidekick line would've been better if you said "Amp aint good enough to even be my sidekick." However, it was pretty decent. Overall, a decent verse. Not strong, but not weak. Just an ehh decent verse. You should've came alot better. And your closer - You're bragging, again. Don't do that, ever again. Talk about your opponent, not you. Your closer is a big part of your battle.
Amp - "Your lines are gayer then two dudes with no chicks." Weak, that's almost as weak as a "cum ill" punch. Not feeling your voice, but you did work with it, and it flowed very well. Add more emotion. The "Memory Card" line has been said before, and you could've worded it alot better, to make it alot hotter. This was pretty elementary, though. Ehh, really not feeling it. This was a decent verse, aswell. Again, you had a really bad closer too bragging about yourself. Dooooooooon't do this. Diss your opponent, your closer is very important in a battle.
This was a weak battle, in my eyes. But I'm going to give it to Laszlo. I didn't like either verse, but Laszlo came harder. But Laszlo - QUIT BRAGGING IN YOUR VERSES. Just spit about your opponent.
votelaszlo
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Maffmatix
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Date: July 11, 2005 @ 5:17 PM
Laszlo- I couldnt get over your bragging and annoying voice. You say my voice is annoying, you're voice sounds actually GAY. Like, you sound like an annoying gay dude. Your punches were pretty good, your production was good, and that was it. It's as if you are trying to annoy the listener though. I aint even hate voting- I voted for Salvation straight up, but your track was too shitty in my oppinion. How am I supposed to vote for your track when it gets me bored and un-entertained?
Amp- Your beat coulda sounded more full, and your voice could have had more emotion in it, but shit you got a good style and you didn't distract me once with some bullshit faggot ass braggin and shit talking. You kept it to strict rappin/battlin. I liked the begginng of the second verse the most. Just pick up your emotion.
VOTE- AMP.
(Laszlo, grow up)
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JRTwine
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Date: July 11, 2005 @ 7:03 PM
yo my vote is you dog VOTE-AMP
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SleazyE
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Date: July 11, 2005 @ 8:06 PM
I am voting on Amp. Wanna know why? The whole first minute of Laszlo's battle was some of the dumbest shit I have ever heard. You weren't even funny. You just talked shit and giggled every 5 seconds like you were Jimmy Fallon in an SNL skit.
Shit. I didn't really like either verses.. but at least when I heard Amp's I had some respect for him.
I'm throwin a vote to AMP.
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Sinicide
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Date: July 11, 2005 @ 9:14 PM
Remember, if you dont give adequate reasoning your vote will not be counted.
LASZLO
Aight.. to avoid being repetitive, Im not going to tell you how much I dont like the intro.. (Note: Your track doesnt HAVE to be the full 3 minutes) That aside, you had me with the first line.. "You gonna finish last like a fat kid's vegetables.." Very nice opening. "You just as hard as Chuckie'z gang affiliation" Some may not understand this one but it got me chucklin'. Also, you cant help but respect the flow, on point thru the whole track.. a rarity these days. And although I had trouble hearing a few lines, you kept 'battle-strong' and your lines never really lacked anywhere in the track. "You had enough yet, nah.. Your mom aint finished cookin my fuckin dinner yet" Basic maybe, but this stood out to me for some reason. My only real problem with this track is you're a little too cocky, and despite the fact you got the lyrics that were on point to back that up, the delivery was bland.
AMP
This track was on point and I think it definatley had potential. Amp got skills but I dont think they were displayed to their capacity. "Cuz in the darkness, the underdog tend to shine" (Unfortunatly, not this time) You did have a couple lines that made me look up: "If you the hope in the future I feel bad for our economy" Wasnt too bad, probably coulda been flipped different for more impact. Same with: "Your lines are gayer than two dudes with no chicks" But it worked. I feel the same way as I do about Laszlo's track, in that you're being too cocky for what you brought to the table.
IN CONCLUSION
This was a close one, neither track really stood out where I can say, "damn, this guy won", but nonetheless they were both very decent tracks. I honestly dont think either emcee brought their A Game to this battle. Both had some nice lines, but I feel Laszlo's were more powerful in both the presentation aspect and context of a traditional battle. My vote goes to -- LASZLO.
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 jd2theog
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Date: July 12, 2005 @ 1:23 AM
Laszlo,maybe you need a longer break at work cause I killed it better than you did!I came out rappin and finished rappin,you came out and talked and it was'nt all that funny.your beat and ryme was ok,but you lost me at the start...
AMP,his mic was hot in the mix,but his beat was better, just needed a better overall sound.As far as lines he Killed Laszlo cause he was on point!
close....
(if las would of just spit more I would of Voted for him)
VOTE=AMP.
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 mystery-machine
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Date: July 12, 2005 @ 12:41 PM
Laszlo: Whatz up with the monologue there at the beginning of the track?
man, as much as you've been talkin it up, I expected ya to bring on the diss when I clicked on but all I heard was more talkin. Ya got some good punches in on the rap but I's so busy tryin to get past that intro. beats and verse was real good tho...
AMP: Beats was hot! I like it. Nice flow on the verses plus you got some good punches in. I think AMP has a better diss track.
Vote=AMP
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 sgtmay
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Date: July 12, 2005 @ 4:25 PM
Laslo: you came off way wrong with yer little monologue.....imo it's not a good thing to call all dm users who aint with you "Birds chirping away like fucking untrained parakeets"..."you kids dont get it"....i havent been a kid since i was your age......you came off like a pompous ass with that monologue and pretty much spoiled what good you did have with your beats and verse.....it displeased me to sit through half a minute of chest beating and another half minute of pointless rambling and empty threats just to hear the track.....total lameness (BOO!!)
AMP: beats are ok and shit....your verse flow is tight and you kept right on game.......your disses could use some work but i would rather hear what you got to say than a minute of talking smack with no beats.
Laslo: you had this round in the bag but you had to come off like a insecure schoolboy who is scared of what everybody thinks of him....(not good)
Amp: You lucked out......if Laslo wouldnt have come off like such an ass hat he would have got my vote......you are gonna have to step up your game for round two if you make the cut.
Vote = AMP
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Dizeazed
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Date: July 12, 2005 @ 5:30 PM
AMP = You didn't come strong enough in the intro. Beat was... interesting. You sound a lil nervous on the mic, maybe cause you were reading ur lyrics?  Flow was sketchy. Had an ok amount of punchles... but nothin stands out expect "gayer then 2 dudes with no chick" and "save a game without a memory card".
LASZLO = Didn't like the intro. You sounded a little goofy, and it was a bit too long. Beat = dope! Your flow was much more polished then AMP's. "Blow like a terrorist *scream*... *explosion*"  That shit actually made me laugh out loud. "Like a dick...He only gets hard around chicks".. heh. Punches we're legit, good shit.
Vote = LASZLO. Amp came pretty good, he just didn't compare with LASZLO's punches or flow.
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Judge2005
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Date: July 13, 2005 @ 3:37 AM
* * * VOTING CLOSED * * *
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FrozenFlame44
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Date: July 13, 2005 @ 4:11 PM
why did my post get deleted????
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