 SalvationMC
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Date: July 10, 2005 @ 9:23 PM
Young Voice - Good beat selection. Your flow was alot better then other dude's. You need to add emotion. You change your tone often, but sound angry. You sound like you're almost reading. Get angry, scream, go rawr hiss grr. You flow did slip up a few times, however. Nothing stand out as for as punchlines. Quality could be alot better, but it's better then dude's. Atleast I could hear your shit. Regardless, you weren't bragging about yourself the entire verse, which is good. Most people nowadays just brag constantly and don't even diss their opponent. Overall, an okay voice. The part that made me go "what the hell...?" the most, was the "what happened to your ear" line .. I didn't get it, at all. I haven't seened his pic before. You gotta remember, when you do lines like this. SAY what it is. You want to make people laugh. Cuz you completely lost me there. Overall, decent verse.
Jd2theog - Boooooooo @ Feeding off verses. That's whack. You were bragging. Don't brag unless it puts himself down when you're doing it. Bragging in battles makes you lose. Your quality is a mix between horrible and bad. Luckily, I could still pick apart your lyrics. You need to learn how to mix your vocals a bit better. Regardless, your flow was very choppy. Lyrics were pretty weak, to be honest with you. The stanza right around 2:00 was pretty bad. You don't tell stories in a battle. That's worse then adding a chorus in a battle. Just being honest my man, I'd rather tell you how to get better then to call you whack and say you're horrible.
With that said,
voteyoungvoice
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Maffmatix
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Date: July 10, 2005 @ 10:21 PM
Young Voice - Beat was pretty hot.. regardless of the fact that it was bad quality. Flow sounded a bit off and on... which is always distracting. You had some decent punches and the lyrics were ok over-all. I think it definately could have been more emotional and more creative. You didn't grab my interest tightly enough. It was decent though.
Jd2theog - Well the beat was very strange.. not terrible, but a little distracting. A bit catchy though. Your voice had more emotion to it and I liked your punches more because I could sense a little more creativity. Your voice was almost too hard to understand, because of the quality... but I could make most of it out. I think with your lyrics, you could try to make it less A-B-C style rapping next time.
All in all, it was really hard for me to decide, but I liked JD's punches a bit better... sooo....
I vote for Jd2theOGGGGG
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onehizy
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Date: July 11, 2005 @ 7:29 AM
voice got my vote just cuz that i can here him better
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Laszlotherapper
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Date: July 11, 2005 @ 12:48 PM
lol id have to say young voice won because i cud hear him. i cudnt hear the other guy (sorry.. maybe its my speakers?).. either way, umm both tracks i listened to fully, but like, both had basic lines like no reeaaal punches on either that made me say ohhhh.... on the other hand flow was okay, young voice had better flow by far... okay basically dats wat i think so hopefully that qualifies as an opinion? lol is it constructive enough Diz??? either way 1
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RobertMcDade
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Date: July 11, 2005 @ 12:51 PM
I liked the beat, flow was on point for the most part, punches were good, and the delivery was alright. Did I hear a hook in that?  I hope not.
Anyway, I know you can come harder than this, make sure you do if you in the next round. 
Vote: Young Voice
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JRTwine
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Date: July 11, 2005 @ 6:56 PM
i likes the flow and the beat was sick the punchlines was nice you got my vote
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SleazyE
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Date: July 11, 2005 @ 8:08 PM
I almost agreed with Maff and TopDolla, but decided that the quality was just too poor for me to understand. The sound just was not good enough.. I couldn't vote for the og.
1 vote- Young Vizzy
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Jormangund
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Date: July 11, 2005 @ 10:07 PM
Both were wack.
Vocals, flow was wack, lyrics was pretty wack too. but since i hafta vote
vote=Youngvoice, came with more disses thruought nonstop
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 independentm...
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Date: July 12, 2005 @ 1:43 PM
Both very good tunes. Gonna vote after a moment of reflection/re-listen.
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independentm...
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Date: July 12, 2005 @ 2:01 PM
I must say that this has been a very HARD decision...
But I am gonna pick THIS song "Bedtime Ghost Stories".
(NOTE to the vote-counter!!! MY vote might not count/be allowed because I happen to be the Admin of Boycott-RIAA which is owned by Dmusic, thus, I am a Dmusic Admin of sorts! If this comes down to a "tie-breaker" ...and it very well might... please disregard my vote!)
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Nitemair
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Date: July 12, 2005 @ 4:58 PM
yo i'm not gonna go into the whole why i voted for who i voted for, but my vote is for J2theog. quality was iffy, but over all was feelin it more than youngvoice. both got skillz though, so keep doin ya shit to both of them.
vote-J2theog
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Nitemair
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Date: July 12, 2005 @ 4:58 PM
Jd2theog, my fault duke.
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Dizeazed
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Date: July 12, 2005 @ 5:55 PM
Jd2theog = No intro? (Just straight to the point, eh?  ) Beat =... interesting. "I got beats older then you on the shelf"  "Zac's mom to the emergency room"  Some of your punches were a bit weak, but I like how you incorporated classic, famous lines from major artists. Good shit.
Young Voice = Beat is coo and works with the title of the battle. Jd2theog had a bit better quality then you. Your flow fell off here and there. You woulda sounded madd better if you memorized your lines or practiced it a bit more before you recorded.
Vote = Young Voice. This was the hardest battle to judge, by far. Both came with moderate punches and only decent quality. In the end, Young Voice’s punches hit me harder and were spit over a grimier beat (just happens to be my style). Good battle you two.
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Judge2005
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Date: July 13, 2005 @ 3:38 AM
* * * VOTING CLOSED * * *
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